tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post7966219326608282822..comments2023-08-11T05:45:01.156-04:00Comments on Writing on the Page: Sunday haikuHeatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15791185232391134319noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-76706809519030827692010-04-13T18:16:54.856-04:002010-04-13T18:16:54.856-04:00Troy, Robin, Pamela, Wayne and James - Thank you a...Troy, Robin, Pamela, Wayne and James - Thank you all so much for taking the time to comment and for letting me know which version you prefer.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15791185232391134319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-38911517579346043542010-04-13T10:27:10.726-04:002010-04-13T10:27:10.726-04:00They are such jewels. I also like the 1st. The exe...They are such jewels. I also like the 1st. The exercise of reversing the lines is something I do with my students. It's a great way to reveal new aspects of a piece.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-47471540759166569972010-04-11T20:52:00.040-04:002010-04-11T20:52:00.040-04:00your haiku is verfy good.....thanksyour haiku is verfy good.....thanksWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-6482501198295926732010-04-11T16:22:33.672-04:002010-04-11T16:22:33.672-04:00Pretty!
PamelaPretty!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-83275641214532673872010-04-11T13:53:32.370-04:002010-04-11T13:53:32.370-04:00Wonderful! Love this...and am also with you in pr...Wonderful! Love this...and am also with you in preferring the first.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237296406471830840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2047888627945690627.post-64499499453664026732010-04-11T11:24:59.178-04:002010-04-11T11:24:59.178-04:00What great, succinct imagery. I also prefer the f...What great, succinct imagery. I also prefer the first, and for the same reason.troysworktablehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10134124055869148540noreply@blogger.com